Saturday, September 02, 2006

MY FIRST BLUE NUMBER:

It is the twilight night of shimmering spring,
Some where in the distance the bright lavenders grow,
The pace of the silvery lake ebbs and slows
The maddening moonlight feels like heaven at this hour,
Babby its only you who is so far....

Rember the first time we met,by the seaside;
The moment felt so miraculous and life was like one joy ride,
The glint in your eyes n the sparkle on ur face,
Truely matched the blue wintery sky's haze
The time that we spent below the chestnut tree,
Hands in hands and arms in arms,
Was like any toddlers facial charms.....

But now the distances have grown and you are so faraway
It makes me wonder that why is there happiness if we have to face dismay??
The stars in the night are adding an enigmatic glow,
But babby life without you is going so slow....

When will the time come when everything will be allright as before?
So that like the first time we can go back to the sea shore,
Near my window sill a sweet cockoo sings,
It is the twilight night of shimmering spring.

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

hey ..
u sure this ur frst poem?? itz amazin babe ..ur givin me a complex now ..brrr ...excellent ...cudnt stop readin till d end ..love d feel u weave throughout the poem ...i'd written a similar one loooooooong time back ..its on my blog ...but nuthin like urs man ...really cant belive this is ur frst one ..itz jus perfect!

amritaa-bhui said...

hey tanvi thanx for ur compliments...

arindama said...

bless you.hope you will continue with the poems.how come there is nothing new for the month of october????
waiting for another beautiful poem.

amritaa-bhui said...

hey arindama thanx for ur good wishes actually as my board exams are nearing my schedules are pretty conjested so dont get much time to put up new posts

Anonymous said...

ur eyes se der is immense passio locked away sumwer deep in ur heart.........ur poem confirms it.....